问答题 PATR TWO
·Your General Manager has asked you to reply to the following letter, which is concerned with a educational visit to your company by a local vocational school. He has written his comments on the letter.
·Write a letter (120-140 words) to the headmaster concerning the changes the manager would like to make to the visit.
·Write on a separate sheet.
Re: Educational Visit
Dear Mr. Jackson,
Thank you for your recent letter accepting our request for an educational visit to your company.
I have spoken to the students concerned as well as the teacher who will accompany them. They are a group of 40, aged between 13 and 15, and will be taking part in the visit as part of their career development program. - Too many -25 students at most.
I would like to suggest Friday 10th December. The group will leave here at 9:00 a. m. and should be with you by 9:45 am. -Date is not good -Monday of the following week is better; time is fine.
I understand the Training Manager is willing to give a talk to the students about the company's training program. This will be of considerable value, and I think it would be most effective at the beginning of the visit. - Training Manager not available until 11:30.
Finally, would it be possible for the students to talk to some new employees in an informal "question and answer" session? -No, sorry! Can't free employees from duties.
I would be grateful if you could inform me whether these proposals are suitable and would like to thank you once again for your co-operation with the scheme for "School and Business Links".
- Please ask him to call us to confirm the changes.
Sincerely,
Mr. Burton
Headmaster