写作题 3.You are preparing to recommend one of your students for an internship in Apple. Write a letter of recommendation to the Apple HR and state the reasons why you recommend this student.
1. You should write about 100 words.
2. Do not sign your own name at the end of your letter. Use "Li Ming" instead.
3. Do not write the address.
【正确答案】 Dear HR,
This letter represents my strong and sincere endorsement of Mr. Zhang Wei, a all-around young man with excellent innovative ability.
Mr. Zhang majors in Industrial Design in Tsinghua University. Being a diligent student in academic research, he always puts forward quite a few constructive opinions on how to promote academic development. Furthermore, he is a person with extraordinary communication skills and rich practical experience. Last summer, he participated in a design project set up by our university and made great contributions to it.
I am certain he is definitely the talent that Apple has been looking for. I recommend him to you without reservation.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
【答案解析】 从体裁角度来看,本题属于推荐信。一般情况下,此类信函是向某单位、组织或个人推荐人才、物品等时常用的书信文体。根据指令要求,考生需向收信人(苹果公司HR)推荐自己的学生,并说明推荐原因,如,具有创新精神、勤勉刻苦、善于沟通、实践经验丰富等。鉴于收信人是公司高层,写作语言应规范、正式。在阐述推荐原因时,一定要实事求是。
第一段:开门见山,点明主题。首先表明自己对被推荐者的肯定,然后介绍此人的整体特点。
第二段:详细原因,充分延展。可从学术、性格、经验等方面人手,展示被推荐者的优点,以提升推荐的成功率。
第三段:再次点题,展现信心。强调被推荐者正是该公司需要的人才,并对此充满信心。