【正确答案】[范文]
As is vividly depicted in the picture, a man stole a identity online but found out that the identity is fake. He sighed that you just couldn't trust people any more. Obviously, it suggests the detrimental effects of the Internet deception.
Currently, the rapid proliferation of Web-based technologies have revolutionized the way content is generated and exchanged over the Internet. However, the Internet has become a breeding ground for deception. Criminals use the Internet to deceive people into disclosing their bank and financial account information or other personal data. In order to account for the deception in details, several serious effects have been put forward. To begin with, Internet deception does not only results in economic losses to the victims but also leads to emotional trauma. In addition, Internet deception threatens the sustainable development of the e-commerce because it undermines trust. Last but not the least, with more and more Internet deception cases being reported, the whole society is filled with distrust, which goes against healthy communication and interaction between people.
Deception in Internet communities can be a serious issue. It is of great significance for us to strengthen the awareness to Internet deception.
【答案解析】 第一段:概述图片的内容,引出话题。
第二段:提出三个分论点阐述当今网络欺诈不利的影响:1.给受害者带来经济损失,情感创伤。2.给电子商务的可持续发展带来危害。3.人与人之间交往甚至整个社会产生不信任氛围。
第三段:重申观点,总结前文。
[参考译文] 正如上图所生动描绘的那样,一个男孩盗了一个身份,结果发现这盗来的身份竟然是假的。他叹息道,以后再也不能相信人了。显然,这暗示了网络诈骗的危害。
如今,快速发展的网页技术改变了网络上内容的产生和交换。然而,互联网已经成了欺诈的滋生地。犯罪分子利用互联网欺骗,骗取人们泄露银行和财务账户信息或者其他个人信息。为了更详细的说明诈骗,列举一下诈骗的几个严重影响。首先。网络欺诈不仅给受骗人造成经济损失,还给他们带来感情创伤。而且,因为其破坏了信任,网络诈骗给电子商务的可持续发展带来危害。最后,随着越来越多的网络诈骗案被报道出来,整个社会充满了不信任,这不利于人与人之间的沟通和交往。
诈骗会是网络社区的一个严重问题。加强网络诈骗意识对于我们来说意义重大。