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In Ethiopia there are nine national parks,two of which include the mountain groups of the Simien and the Bale,while the others lie in the Rift Valley towards Kenya.The unforeseeable wild landscapes are surely the main attraction of these parks,where many of the animal species are protected,and some of them are endemic to the area.The proximity of Ethiopia to the Equator and the variety of its habitats make it one of the richest countries in Africa in wild bird life.
【答案解析】这是一个介绍埃塞俄比亚国家公园的导游词。翻译时要注意语言的准确和精练。原文while the others…中的“而”不一定要翻译出来。译者将原文where many of the animal species are protected的语序按照中文的表达习惯做了调整,使意思表达更清晰。把原文The proximity of Ethiopia to the Equator and the variety of its habitats中的两个名词proximity和variety分别翻译成动词,并把原句的复合主语拆分成两个单句,表达清晰易懂,富有层次感。