问答题 I （10 marks） The following e－mail is written in an inappropriate style and contains a lot of redundant language． Return Path Sender Cecil Pratt Date 10 Dec 2012 16：47 To dasilva@hotmail．com Subject phone enquiry My dearest Mrs．da Silva， With reference to your esteemed telephone enquiry which I received on 1 April last， I now have great pleasure in providing you with the information you requested from me on that occasion． We are indeed very much in a position to supply your firm with the computer accessories that are required by your information systems department， namely optical disks， printer cartridges，mouse mats， screen filters plus various cables and leads at cetera． I am sending， for your perusal ， our latest completely up － to － date catalogue which not only contains a full and complete description of all our products and equipment but also a precise and detailed breakdown of prices． It goes without saying that these prices can be discounted if it should be decided by you that a bulk order can be placed． I would like to take this opportunity to express my gratitude for the interest you have shown in our products and I very much look forward to doing business with you in the not－too－fardistant future． I remain， Yours very sincerely， Cecil Pratt Rewrite it in a more economical way in about 100 words on the answer sheet ． Theimportant messages need to be included．
【正确答案】My dearest Mrs da Silva, With reference to your telephone enquiry on 1 April, I am glad to tell you that we are able to provide your firm with the computer accessories, namely optical disks, printer cartridges, mouse mats, screen filters plus various cables, and leads at cetera. I am sending, for your reference, our latest and complete catalogue, which contains product descriptions as well as product quotes. If you place a bulk order, we can offer discounts for you. I would like to express my gratitude for your interest in our products and I am looking forward to doing business with you in the future. Yours very sincerely, Cecil Pratt
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