假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线 (\) 划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:
2. 只允许修改10处,多者 (从第11处起)不计分。
Last Friday my mom decided to color his hair. She studied with all the hair products at the drugstore. The color she choose came in a box which had a picture of a woman that hair color looked just perfect. Mom was sure same color would look great on her. She put the new color on her hair or sat still for 30 minutes, just as the directions saying. However, instead of the brownish red hair she had hoped for, she final got purple hair. She went right into the shower to washing it, but it was no use. At least one thing proved truth: the color wouldn’t wash out.
1. his → her
2. 删除with
3. choose → chose
4. that → whose
5. same前加the
6. or → and
7. saying → said
8. final → finally
9. washing → wash
10. truth → true
1.考查代词。句意:上周五,我妈妈决定染头发。此处指“我妈妈染她头发”,应用代词her。故his改为her。
2.考查动词。句意:她研究了药店里所有的护发产品。study是及物动词,后面应该直接接宾语,介词with多余。故删除with。
3.考查时态。句意:她选的颜色装在一个盒子里,盒子里有一张女人的照片,她的头发颜色看起来非常完美。此处是定语从句的谓语动词,由上文Last Friday可知,应用一般过去时。故choose改为chose。
4.考查定语从句。句意:她选的颜色装在一个盒子里,盒子里有一张女人的照片,她的头发颜色看起来非常完美。此处是限定性定语从句,先行词是woman,关系词在从句中作hair的定语,应用关系代词whose引导。故that改为whose。
5.考查冠词。句意:妈妈确信同样的颜色在她身上会很好看。same前常加定冠词。故same前加the。
6.考查连词。句意:她把头发染成新的颜色,静静地坐了30分钟,就像说明书上说的那样。此处是并列顺承关系,不存在选择关系。故or改为and。
7.考查动词时态。句意:她把头发染成新的颜色,静静地坐了30分钟,就像说明书上说的那样。as引导方式状语从句,由语境可知,句子陈述过去发生的事情,应用一般过去时。故saying改为said。
8.考查副词。句意:然而,她最终得到的不是她所希望的棕红色头发,而是紫色的头发。此处修饰动词got,应用副词,作状语。故final改为finally。
9.考查非谓语动词。句意:她直接走进淋浴间去洗,但是没有用。此处不定式表目的,应用动词原形。故washing改为wash。
10.考查形容词。句意:至少有一件事被证明是正确的:这种颜色洗不掉。prove为系动词,表示“证明是”,后接形容词。故truth改为true。