Jane Austen was an English novelist, who spent her life in middle
class society; which she described intimately and with ironical
humor in her novels, the most famous which are Sense and Sensi-
bility; Mansfield Park, Emma, and Persuasion. She was the first
English writer who gave the novel their modem characteristics 【A1】________
through the treatment of everyday life. Since Austen was widely 【A2】________
read in her lifetime she published her works anonymously. The
most emergent preoccupation of her bright, young heroines is 【A3】________
courtship and finally marriage. Austen herself never married. Jane
Austen was mostly tutored hat home, and irregularly at school, but
she accepted a broader education than many women of her time. She 【A4】________
started to write for family amusement as a child. Her parents were
avid reader. Very shy about her writing. she wrote on small pieces 【A5】________
of paper that she slipped under the desk. In her letters she observed
the daily lives of her family and friends in an intimate and gossipy 【A6】________
manner. Austen's father supported his daughter's writing aspirations
and tried to help her get a publisher. Austen never married,
but her social life was positive and she had suitors and romantic 【A7】________
dreams. Austen well connected with the middling-rich landed gentry 【A8】________
that she portrayed in her novels. Austen was focused on middle-class 【A9】________
provincial life with humor and under standing. She depicted minor
landed gentry, country clergymen and their families, there marriage 【A10】________
mainly determined women's social status.
【A1】
their→its
(此处指代的“the novel”是单数。所以把their改成its。)
【A2】
Since→Although
(根据句意,虽然奥斯汀为读者所熟知,但她还是选择匿名发表作品。此句中的上下句关系应为转折而不是因果。所以把Since改成Although。)
【A3】
emergent→urgent
(根据句意,奥斯汀作品中年轻的女主人公最迫切的当务之急是求爱和最终的婚姻。emergent应急的, urgent紧急的。所以把emergent改成urgent。)
【A4】
accepted→received
(接受教育应该用receive而不是accept。所以把accepted改成received。)
【A5】
reader→readers
(根据句意,奥斯汀的父母是她的忠实读者,此处应该用复数。所以将reader改成readers。)
【A6】
lives→life
(日常生活应该使用固定搭配daily life。所以将lives改成life。)
【A7】
positive→active
(根据句意,形容社会生活应该用active“活跃的”,而不是positive“积极的”。所以将positive改成 active。)
【A8】
Austen∧well→was
(be connected with...是固定搭配,表示与……有联系。此句为过去时,所以在well前面加入was。)
【A9】
was删掉
(根据句意,奥斯汀以幽默和理解的方式关注中产阶级的生活。在这里,应使用主动语态,所以去掉was。)
【A10】
there→where
(根据语法知识,此处为非限制性定语从句,应该用where来引导。所以将there改成where。)