问答题
Directions
: In this part, you are to write within 30 minutes a composition of no less than 150 words under the title of
My Opinion About Online Communication
. Your composition should be based on the cues given below. Please remember to write the composition clearly on the
COMPOSITION SHEET
.
1. Introductory remarks.
2. My opinion about online communication.
3. Conclusion.
【正确答案】
【答案解析】[参考范文]
With the rapid development of Internet, people in growing numbers begin to communicate with each other online. For some, online communication has become a part of their life.
To my best knowledge, we can easily recognize the positive effects of online communication as follows. To begin with, the Web has offered us tremendous convenience like high efficiency and flexible place of communication. Moreover, social networking websites like Renren or Facebook, with instant messengers like MSN or QQ, help us get and stay in touch with others with a few clicks. In this sense, we are brought much closer in the virtual world.
For all the advantages mentioned above, online communication is by no means without its limitations, as listed below. In the first place, some people spend too much time online, which may affect their health. In the second, online communication could make people less willing to interact with others face to face. In this sense, online communication has made people farther away in the real world.
To my best understanding, it is advisable that we take a rational attitude towards this issue. On the one hand, online communication may produce certain positive effects. On the other, there can be some problems involved. It is preferable that we make full use of the positive sides and meanwhile minimize the negative effects. We may be connected by the web, but we are not supposed to be confined within it.
[解析] 1.主题与类型:题目要求讨论对于网络交流的看法,从题目本身和第二行提示来看,并没有要求考生选择支持还是反对。就话题本身的两面性而言,这是比较典型的利弊分析型文章,可写四个自然段。
2.结构与构思:
第一段:开始先交代背景,可以写互联网的发展促进了人们网络交流,或网络交流成为人际关系中重要的部分等。
第二段:段首句使用优势分析主题句“...we can easily recognize the positive effects of...as follows”。接下来列举两三个方面的优势,如果只能想到两条,可以加上例子来充实内容。
第三段:段首句使用弊端承上启下的主题句“For all the..., ...without its limitations, as listed below”。仍然是列举两三条弊端。
第四段:首句使用理智看待话题的主题句“...it is advisable that...towards this issue”。接下来使用对比利弊的两句功能句“on the one hand, ...on the other, ...”,将主题词嵌入句子。然后使用扬长避短的结论句,但该部分尽量不要只列举功能句,而是要结合本话题提出建议或希望,比如可以使用互联网作为交际工具,但不应被束缚在其中。