写作题

The smart phone is very popular now. However, people are divided in their opinion about this seemingly remarkable invention. Some consider that it effectively solves the informational needs of the phone user, while others hold that it causes failure in people-to-people communication and brings along a lot of other problems. Write an argumentative essay of about 400 words on this topic. You may supply a title yourself.

In the first part of your essay you should state clearly your main argument, and in the second part you should support your argument with appropriate details. In the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks. 

【正确答案】

Smart phones have already become an indispensable part of our daily life. No matter where we are, we can see people busy playing with their smart phones. People have mixed reviews about smartphones. In my opinion, as a product of modern science and technology, the smart phone is neutral. The key lies in the user, whether he can control myself and use smart phones reasonably. People are relying more and more on the smart phone because of its convenience.

People can connect with friends all over the world at any time, and they can go out without cash. Mobile phones serve as media for people to connect with others. Most people, however, concentrate on their phones all day long. For many people, the last thing you see in the evening and the first thing in the morning, is not your child, nor your lover, but your phone. If one doesn' t have a cell phone for a day, it feels like out of touch with the world.

Social software like QQ and WeChat has become where out social relationships begin and develop. All kinds of information come into our mind and our time is cut to pieces. Many of us get used to read passages on our phone, therefore, people don' t have time to be patient to read books and to do in-depth research. People can find the information they want so easily that they don' t have to memorize or organize their own language. There were a lot of things that people need to keep in mind before the popularity of smart phones. One had to use his own language and to organize information in mind. And now everyone can collect information at anytime. The smart phone is like our memory. Once a piece of information in it is deleted, maybe one can never think of it again. Our eyes and our brains are busy every day, but there are very few real useful things left behind.

When we spend too much time on smart phones, we don’ t have time to communicate face to face with our friends or family. Our life, studies and work will be badly affected. People should be cautious of the excessive reliance on smart phones. We should be the master of our smart phone and make full use of it, instead of being controlled by it. We are supposed to put the phone down, read some books and talk with our family. 

【答案解析】

题目要求写一篇关于智能手机利弊的议论文,并明确指出第一部分要陈述自己的主要论点。第二部分使用论据来支撑自己的论点。最后一部分进行总结。本文第一段提出了作者的论点,即智能手机不存在好与坏,关键在于使用者是否能自控,合理使用手机。第二、三段指出智能手机为我们的生活带来了很多便利,人们越来越依赖智能手机,手机就像我们的记忆库。最后一段作者提出了自己的建议,即我们应该是手机的主人,而不应该被手机控制。我们要放下手机,阅读一些好书,与家人们聊聊天。