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Re: New computers The aim of this report is {{U}}presenting{{/U}}
(to present) the best {{U}} {{U}} 2 {{/U}} {{/U}}{{U}}choose{{/U}}
for the company in replacing its computers in the central administration
offices. Following some {{U}} {{U}} 3 {{/U}}
{{/U}}{{U}}initially{{/U}} research, we narrowed the field down to three
possibilities: The first, DX590, is the {{U}} {{U}}
4 {{/U}} {{/U}}{{U}}more{{/U}} expensive of the three, {{U}} {{U}}
5 {{/U}} {{/U}}{{U}}with{{/U}} a cost of $590 per unit. However, it is the
most {{U}} {{U}} 6 {{/U}} {{/U}}{{U}}powerfull{{/U}} and adaptable.
The second, the HS Venturer, is a little cheaper to purchase, at $555, but has a
smaller hard disk capacity and a slower processor. The third, the Songsing
AF100, is {{U}} {{U}} 7 {{/U}} {{/U}}{{U}}the{{/U}} bargain at $480
and has similar specifications to the HS Venturer. However, Songsing is a
relatively new company and thus it is difficult {{U}} {{U}} 8
{{/U}} {{/U}}{{U}}getting{{/U}} references for the product.
{{U}} {{U}} 9 {{/U}} {{/U}}{{U}}The another{{/U}} very important
factor is the after-sales package. {{U}} {{U}} 10 {{/U}}
{{/U}}{{U}}Every{{/U}} three companies offer between 1 and 3-year service {{U}}
{{U}} 11 {{/U}} {{/U}}{{U}}garantees{{/U}}, but on slightly different
terms and at different prices. The best of these is the DX590's two-year
warranty, {{U}} {{U}} 12 {{/U}} {{/U}}{{U}}that{{/U}} is an on-site
24-hour repair service. In conclusion, we recommend {{U}}
{{U}} 13 {{/U}} {{/U}}{{U}}to purchase{{/U}} the DX590. The HS Venturer
offers much less for a similar price, while the Songsing AF100 is probably too
risky, because it has {{U}} {{U}} 14 {{/U}} {{/U}}{{U}}any{{/U}}
track record. With good service back-up, the DX590 {{U}} {{U}} 15
{{/U}} {{/U}}{{U}}can{{/U}} also prove to be the most economical {{U}}
{{U}} 16 {{/U}} {{/U}}{{U}}on{{/U}} the long run.