问答题
3. The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.
【正确答案】[范文]
The map shows two proposed locations (S1 and S2) for a new supermarket for the town of Garlsdon.
The first potential location (S1) is outside the town itself, and is sited just off the main road to the town of Hindon, lying 12 kms to the north-west. This site is in the countryside and so would be able to accommodate a lot of car parking. This would make it accessible to shoppers from both Hindon and Garlsdon who could travel by car. As it is close to the railway line linking the two towns of Cransdon (25 kms to the south-east), a large number of shoppers would also be able to travel by train.
In contrast, the suggested location, S2, is right in the town centre, which would be good for local residents. Theoretically the store could be accessed by road or rail from the surrounding towns, including Bransdon, but as the central area is a no-traffic zone, cars would be unable to park and access would be difficult.
Overall, neither site is appropriate for all the towns, but for customers in Cransdon, Hindon and Garlsdon, the out-of-town site (S1) would probably offer more advantages.
The map shows two proposed locations (S1 and S2) for a new supermarket for the town of Garlsdon.
The first potential location (S1) is outside the town itself, and is sited just off the main road to the town of Hindon, lying 12 kms to the north-west. This site is in the countryside and so would be able to accommodate a lot of car parking. This would make it accessible to shoppers from both Hindon and Garlsdon who could travel by car. As it is close to the railway line linking the two towns of Cransdon (25 kms to the south-east), a large number of shoppers would also be able to travel by train.
In contrast, the suggested location, S2, is right in the town centre, which would be good for local residents. Theoretically the store could be accessed by road or rail from the surrounding towns, including Bransdon, but as the central area is a no-traffic zone, cars would be unable to park and access would be difficult.
Overall, neither site is appropriate for all the towns, but for customers in Cransdon, Hindon and Garlsdon, the out-of-town site (S1) would probably offer more advantages.
【答案解析】 1.语言表达
本文的语言简洁精练，不刻意用长难句，却在用词和句式上变化多端。引用数字的方法灵活多变，表示上升和下降的表达也不拘泥模板。
● The map shows two proposed locations (S1 and S2) for a new supermarket for the town of Garlsdon.
雅思小作文首段统一对原题进行paraphrase。本句用two proposed locations替换two possible sites。
● The first potential location (S1) is outside the town itself, and is sited just off the main road to the town of Hindon, lying 12 kms to the north-west.
本句用and和一个分词短语lying 12 kms...，叙述了三个重点，避免主语的重复。
注意be sited表示位于。学习介词off(在路旁)和to(不接壤的西北边)用法。
● In contrast, the suggested location, S2, is right in the town centre, which would be good for local residents.
本句用非限制性定语从句补充说明超市在市中心选址对当地人来说很方便。描述一个事物时要学会用此类从句，使句式结构更加紧凑。
2.逻辑结构
本文是典型的总分总结构的小作文。开篇先paraphrase原题。第二、三部分分别描述地图中的两个超市选址点及其优缺点。最后一段概括说明了S1相对更合适一些。
本文的语言简洁精练，不刻意用长难句，却在用词和句式上变化多端。引用数字的方法灵活多变，表示上升和下降的表达也不拘泥模板。
● The map shows two proposed locations (S1 and S2) for a new supermarket for the town of Garlsdon.
雅思小作文首段统一对原题进行paraphrase。本句用two proposed locations替换two possible sites。
● The first potential location (S1) is outside the town itself, and is sited just off the main road to the town of Hindon, lying 12 kms to the north-west.
本句用and和一个分词短语lying 12 kms...，叙述了三个重点，避免主语的重复。
注意be sited表示位于。学习介词off(在路旁)和to(不接壤的西北边)用法。
● In contrast, the suggested location, S2, is right in the town centre, which would be good for local residents.
本句用非限制性定语从句补充说明超市在市中心选址对当地人来说很方便。描述一个事物时要学会用此类从句，使句式结构更加紧凑。
2.逻辑结构
本文是典型的总分总结构的小作文。开篇先paraphrase原题。第二、三部分分别描述地图中的两个超市选址点及其优缺点。最后一段概括说明了S1相对更合适一些。