Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay that begins with the  sentence “To increase the likelihood of success, one should set realistic goals and work  persistently towards them.” You can make comments, cite examples or use your personal  experiences to develop your essay. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200  words. 

You should copy the sentence given in quotes at the beginning of your essay.

【正确答案】

The Roles of Realistic Goals and Persistence in Achieving Success

[1] To increase the likelihood of success, one should set realistic goals and work persistently towards them.  [2]Setting realistic goals ensures that our aspirations are attainable,while persistence helps us stay on track despite inevitable challenges.

[3]For one thing,realistic goals are crucial because they are grounded in our current abilities, resources and circumstances.  [4]For instance, when a student decides to improve his grades, setting a goal of ten points increase on average in the next semester is more feasible than an aim of straight A's. A goal that is too ambitious might lead to discouragement if it is unmet, while one that is realistic offers a sense of accomplishment and progress. [5] For another, persistence is key to overcoming setbacks and maintaining motivation. The path to success is often not a smooth one; there will be obstacles and moments of doubt.  [6]Take the story of Thomas Edison for example. He failed thousands of times before inventing the light bulb, but his persistence eventually bore the fruit of groundbreaking success.

[7]In conclusion, setting realistic goals and persistence form the backbone of success. By achieving our goals step by step and working persistently, we can build confidence in overcoming obstacles and eventually achieve greater success.

【答案解析】

[1]引出话题:为了增加成功的可能性,一个人应该设定现实的目标,并坚持不懈地为之努力。

[2]进一步指出设定现实的目标确保我们的愿望是可实现的,而坚持不懈帮助我们在不可避免的挑战中不偏离正确轨道。

[3]使用“For one thing,...”指出现实的目标至关重要,因为它们的设定是以我们当前的能力、资源和所处环境为依据。

[4]使用“For instance,...”举例说明设定现实目标的重要性。

[5]使用“For another,...”指出坚持不懈是战胜挫折和保持动力的关键。

[6]用爱迪生的故事进行举例说明。

[7]用“In conclusion,...”总结全文,再次强调设定现实的目标与坚持不懈是成功的支柱。通过一步步实现目标并持之以恒,我们可以建立起克服困难的信心并最终取得更大的成功。


重点词汇:

break down 分解

manageable tasks能应对的任务

learn from failures从失败中学习

frustration 沮丧

unwavering perseverance坚定的毅力

encounter 遇到,遭遇

be paved with用……铺就,充满

Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration.天才是百分之一的灵感加上百分之九十九的汗水。