【答案解析】[写作要求]
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文章基本内容
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列出当地产要交通方式,并提出如何改善交通设施的建议 |
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语法与结构 |
1.描写、说明及建议性语言的应用 2.恰当运用与交通主题相关的词汇 |
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文章结构及连贯性 |
此报告应组织结构清晰完整,有开场白和结尾。有分标题更好
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适用文体及格式 |
正式文体和非正式文体皆可,但要求整体文体风格统一;不必完全按照正式报告的版面格式 |
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目标读者感觉 |
对当地的交通情况有所了解 |
[参考范文]
Traneport
Methode
Most people in Haidian District travel by bike,
car, bus, or light-rail. The rail line is an easy way for people to reach
central Beijing. The bus system is also heavily used, and enables people to
reach most parts of Beijing. While the number of bike riders in this district is
quite large, most of them use another form of transportation for long-distance
travel. As the local economy improves, the number of private cars has been
increasing. In particular, sport utility vehicles and other large vehicles
appear quite popular nowadays.
Problems
The area has
experienced an increase in automobile traffic and pollution in the past few
years, and car travel is particularly slow during the rush hour. The best way to
deal with these problems might be to add more bus and subway lines, and to
increase the number of operating buses and subway cars. This would make these
systems more comfortable, and it would be easier for the city government to
convince citizens to use these systems, rather than personal cars, whenever
possible.