Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay that begins with the sentence “Nowadays, more and more students have realized the importance of self- discipline in their personal growth.” You can make comments, cite examples or use your personal experiences to develop your essay. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

You should copy the sentence given in quotes at the beginning of your essay.

【正确答案】

The Importance of Self-discipline in Personal Growth[1]Nowadays,more and more students have realized the importance of self-discipline in their personal growth.[2]As for me, in a world full of distractions,cultivating self-discipline has become increasingly important for achieving academic success, shaping personal characters and addressing challenges.

[3] First and foremost, self-discipline is essential for achieving academic success.For instance, a student who practices self-discipline will prioritize studying over unnecessary distractions and avoid cramming at the last minute.【4] In addition to academic benefits, self-discipline also plays a significant role in shaping a student's character and personality. It helps to cultivate valuable life skills such as time management, goal setting, and decision-making, all of which are essential for personal growth. [5]Moreover,students who possess self-discipline are better equipped to handle challenges. In the face of setbacks or failures, self-discipline enables students to keep going, learn from their mistakes, and try again. This will help them build resilience, which will give them lifelong benefits.

[6]In conclusion, self-discipline is a vital trait that empowers students to reach their full potential in their personal growth.


【答案解析】

[1]引出话题:如今,越来越多的学生已经意识到自律在个人发展中的重要性。

[2]使用“As for me,...”提出个人观点,即“培养自律对于取得学业成功、塑造个人性格及应对挑战的重要性与日俱增”。

[3][4][5]分别使用“First andforemost,..."“In addition to...”和“Moreover,...”逐条阐述自律对于取得学业成功、塑造性格及应对挑战的重要性。

[6]用“In conclusion,...”总结全文,再次强调自律是一种帮助学生在个人发展中充分发挥潜力的重要品质。


重点词汇:

intrinsic motivation内在动机

external pressure外部压力

cornerstone基石

resist temptation抵制诱惑

control emotions控制情绪

complete tasks on time按时完成任务

put off assignments推迟任务

indispensable不可或缺的

build resilience in the face of adversity在逆境中培养韧性

self-control自我控制

willpower意志力

disciplined有纪律的

self-regulation自我调节

self-restraint自我克制

self-management自我管理

self-motivation自我激励