问答题

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition of no less than 150 words under the title“On Excessive Packaging”. Your composition should be based on the following outline.

1. 目前许多商品存在过度包装的现象;

2. 出现这一现象的原因;
3. 我对这一现象的看法和建议。

【正确答案】

On Excessive Packaging

Nowadays, the phenomenon of excessive packaging has become increasingly serious. Lots of packages have already deviated from their original function. Excessive packaging is a serious waste phenomenon, which deserves our special attention and penetrating research.

There are several reasons accounting for excessive packaging. The first reason is that a large number of companies believe that they can attract customers’ attention and stimulate their purchasing desire by over-packaging their goods, thus gaining more profits. On the other hand, quite a number of consumers mistakenly hold that the more delicate the package is, the better the quality will be, thus encouraging excessive packaging.

In my point of view, excessive packaging not only creates waste of resources, but also causes unnecessary environment pollution, so we should try our best to eliminate this phenomenon completely. To solve this problem, the government should implement policy to restrict excessive packaging of companies. Besides, we need to raise consumer’s awareness that excessive packaging doesn’t equal to high quality and advocate packaging recycling. 

【答案解析】

本篇作文为议论文。题目要求对过度包装这一现象进行评论。考生在写作时,首先应引出话题,指出许多商品存在过度包装的情况,然后给出原因,最后,提出自己的建议和看法。文章第一段描述了过度包装现象在现代社会是普遍的,我们应该重视它。第二段分别从企业和消费者的角度来分析过度包装这种现象的原因。最后一段,作者给出了看法和一些建议,认为过度包装是一个严肃的话题,我们应该努力去解决它。