作文题

Write about the following topic at least 400 words. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar, clarity and the appropriateness of your writing. You should supply an appropriate title for your essay.

Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool. Others, however, believe that videos games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits?

【正确答案】

My Views on Video Games

It is a prevailing practice that university students play network games in their spare time for relaxation. Some teachers and parents hold the negative opinion that many students are so obsessed with network games that they while away their valuable time. However, some others believe that video games has become an industry in modern society, therefore it's surely to be encouraged. Weighing the benefits and drawbacks of video, I believe the conditions vary from person to person, so we need to analyze the problem on both sides.

On the one hand, we would say video games does more harm than good as we look at students whose primary task is to accomplish the assignments in school. Especially for kids whose mentalities haven't grown mature, video games may lead them to the wrong direction. Children who play more violent video games are more likely to have increased aggressive thoughts, feelings, and behaviors, and decreased prosocial helping. In many games, kids are rewarded for being more violent. However, violence and bad behavior played in the virtual world may result in violent behaviors in the real world, since games can confuse reality and fantasy. Besides, academic achievement may be negatively related to over-all time spent playing video games. Many game players routinely skip their homework to play games, confessing that their video game habits are often responsible for poor school grades. Worst of all, video games are also detrimental to children's health, which may bring obesity, video-induced seizures, and postural, muscular and skeletal disorders.

On the other hand, it shouldn't be noticed that video games has emerged as a rising industry and some are even included in international games. The great contribution it made to national economic progress may justify the existence of the industry and the professional gamers. Serving as an economic driver, the prospering market helps us to better realize the crucial role video games play in today's society. From this point of view, it's advisable to analyze it beyond its role as a recreation activity. For example, e-sports has been included as demonstration sport in 2018 Asian Games, which means video games is recognized by sports community. The professional gamers can also win awards for their states, yielding personal fame and achievements. Besides, playing games indeed reward the professional gamers with considerable income, which means they are not wasting time but making use of their strength.

In conclusion, video games should be not be judged partially. We need to take a critical view about it. The most important is that it should be correctly used so that we can gain more benefits from it.

【答案解析】

题目要求针对电子游戏的利弊谈自己的看法,本文从正反两方面分析电子游戏的影响。首先,开头简述了人们对游戏的不同看法,再引出作者的观点,即应该辩证地看待。一方面,从对学生的影响说明电子游戏给学生带来的弊大于益。另一方面,从对社会经济的贡献来看,分析电子游戏的积极作用。最后,总结呼应开头,再次说明我们应该辩证地分析这一事物,要正确使用。全文正反对比分析,详略得当。