【答案解析】[写作要求]
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文章基本内容
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描述生活中最重要的人物并说明原因 |
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语法与结构 |
运用描述和说明性语言 |
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文章结构及连贯性 |
运用段落和衔接词清晰地展开观点 |
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适用文体及格式 |
非正式、正式皆可,但整篇文章的文体应保持统一 |
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目标读者感觉 |
能读懂文中在作者生活中最重要的人物的相关信息 |
[参考范文]
The most important person in my life is the lady who sells me bean curd
for breakfast. This may seem strange, but I have come to realize how much she
means to me.
She is the first person I see every day-she is
always there at six in the morning outside my building, and always talks to me
with a kind smile. Over the years, I have gradually gotten to know her. She was
born in a village outside the city. The village has always been poor, and she
left years ago to look for a better life. It's hard for her to find a good job,
but she works hard and sends the money to her family back home. Whenever I feel
like complaining about my problems, I think about her, her life, and the way she
smiles when talking about her family.
Her service to me is not
great. Yet she reminds me that kindness is important, whether it is great or
small, to family or to strangers.