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【答案解析】February 12th, 2008
The day is my Dad's birthday. This afternoon I went to the shopping center downtown, and bought a present for him. Then I took the subway train home. Sitting on the train, I thought my Dad would be very happy when he saw the present. At the next station, an old lady with two heavy bags got on the train and stood in front of me. She looked tired. I hesitated for a moment, and then offered my seat to her. The old lady thanked me a lot and sat down. Seeing her smile, I felt happy. I will always be ready to help others in the future.
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1.本文的命题形式为“汉语提示+三幅图画”、“记叙+议论”,体裁为日记,时态以一般过去时为主。
2.叙述事情发生的时间、地点。
3.为爸爸买生日礼物。
4.买完生日礼物后,坐地铁回家。
5.见老奶奶提着重物,找不到座位。
6.为老奶奶让座。
7.看到老奶奶笑容倍受鼓舞,决心以后更多地帮助别人。