作文题

Write an essay of 400 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should:

1) describe the drawing briefly
2) explain its intended meaning, and
3) give your comments

【正确答案】

More Reasonable About the Civil Servants Examination

According to the picture above, there is a bowl named as civil servants in the middle. There are only two lonely buildings on the left side of the picture. Moreover, the left part is sparsely populated. People on the ladder to the left are also very few, not to mention someone is leaving away. In contrast, the right side is full of fun. On the right, there are a number of high-rise buildings crowded with huge amounts of people. So many people want to climb to this place through the right ladder that some people even fell from it. Even so, the congestion cannot stop the enthusiastic people from getting into the busy and alive parts.

After observing the picture, we can see that the number of people who take part in the civil servants examinations is set in an unprecedented scale. As the number of positions in need reaches its highest of all time and permissions for application has been set to its minimum. However, applicants are mainly scratching their heads into the first-tier cities such as Beijing, Shanghai and Guangzhou. By contrast, posts for the remote areas or the railway and public security system are left with few people to care for. All in all, for such posts like civil servants, we should keep our heads clear because the priority of it is to serve people rather than for individual interest.

Personally, with the growing employment pressure faced by the graduates as well as the stable working conditions and treatments, I can understand why so many people are striving for the limited positions in the prosperous areas. However, it still requires rationality to register the civil servants examinations. We cannot follow the general trend where all the young are preparing for the civil servant examinations but be resolute in yourselves and know clearly what you want the most.

Whoever wants to register should be clear about his ability and his future responsibility. On the one hand, he should check whether he is suitable for the job requirements. For example, one should be equipped with the anti-pressure ability to the people's complaints and leaders' scold and the ability to resist against outward temptation. On the other hand, one should know clearly what he or she would have met with after being enrolled. Individual behavior will represent the grace of the government and the benefit of the country. Therefore, one must be super cautious about registering the civil servants examination.

【答案解析】

本文首先从解释图片出发,将图片上的所有内容根据直观所见进行介绍:一只名为“公务员”的碗,左半边人烟稀少,人迹罕至。而右半边则高楼林立,人山人海,熙熙攘攘。之后作者从深度的角度出发,观察此图我们可以看出,本次国考设置岗位数量之多史无前例,报考权限设定也降至最低,不过北上广等一线城市中报考职位的报名人数堪称“挤破头”,偏远地区或各地铁路公安系统却无人问津。最后提出自己的观点——树立正确择业观,在公考报名上要趋于理性。无论选择什么职业,都要考虑清楚自己的能力以及自己可能要承担的责任。不能总是随大流。要保持头脑清醒。