【正确答案】Dear Li Ming,
Jan.6,2011
I am more than happy to learn that you have been admitted by your dream university and please accept my heart-felt congratulations on this important success.
In the midst of excitement,you may also wonder at how to get prepared for the forth. coming college life.My own college experience tells me that you should take advantage of the few recent weeks to learn to be independent by taking care of your own life.In addition, make a list of things that you think essential for your college study like necessary documents and dictionary.Last but not least,search online for as much information as possible about your university and the city SO that you can easily find your way there.
Believe me,you will enjoy and benefit from this wonderful leg of life journey.
Zhang Wei
【答案解析】[解析]
这是一封祝贺加上建议的书信。作者在一开始表达了自己由衷的祝贺(heart-felt congratulations),注意congratulation通常用复数,介词是on,后面接上的是祝贺的缘由,其动词是congratulate,用法是congratulate sb.on sth.。
本信的第二个任务是提出建议。在这里,作者提出3个非常实际可行的建议:迅速培养自立、开列所需物品清单、到网上查找关于大学的信息。
最后作者还表达了祝福,相信收信人会享受一段新的人生旅途。