写作题 4.We often donate money to the needy in many ways. But sometimes people are worried about where the money actually goes. What do you think? Write a composition in NO LESS THAN 200 words on the following topic:
My View on Donating
You are to write in three parts:
In the first part, state specifically what your idea is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your idea or describe your idea.
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization, language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.

【正确答案】 My View on Donating
Donation is a charitable act to benefit the most disadvantaged, and it is a generous offer to those in need. Sadly, sometimes, the donated money and goods are embezzled or taken by the charity organizations. And thus I think it is wise to adopt a third-party organization to audit the donation and publish the results periodically.
First of all, the involvement of a third party will ensure the impartiality of the charity foundation. People are worried about the whereabouts of their donation, because there is no watchdog to monitor the charity foundation, which could easily pocket the donated money and goods at their own will. Once an impartial auditor is in the picture, a check-and-balance system will be established. Secondly, publishing the auditing results will guarantee transparency, which, in turn, will lead to the increased accountability of the operation When the results are made accessible to the donors, every penny must be accounted for. And those running the charity group will be pushed to do a better job and make sure the money is well spent for the intended purpose.
In conclusion, by obliging a third party to periodically review and release the whereabouts of the donation, the neutrality and transparency are achieved. In this way, more and more people will be willing to make donations, because they are assured that every penny really counts.

【答案解析】 本题属于“自由发挥型”作文，涉及的题材是“社会热点”。该题要求考生对“捐赠”提出个人的意见。按照题目的要求，可谋篇布局如下：
第一段：由所捐的物资遭到慈善组织的挪用或侵吞人题，指出应该让第三方机构来审计捐款并定期公布结果。
第二段：阐述原因。第一，引入第三方机构能保证慈善组织的公正性；第二，公布审计结果能确保透明性，从而能督促慈善组织对自身的运行负责。
第三段：让第三方机构定期地审核和发布捐款的状况，能保证慈善组织的中立和透明。