【正确答案】Dear Mr. Howell,
My name is Li Min and my uncle told me that you're traveling in China. Since you're the best friend of my uncle, I am looking forward to meeting you in person. And I believe that I can be the best guide during your vacation in China. Hope to see you soon!
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Min
【答案解析】[写作点睛]
(1)电子邮件中,邮件形式和句子长度不要太单调,有时短句和长句相夹显得灵活。
(2)使用实义动词比系表结构更有力量,更加吸引人。
例如:Prunton products are high effective in...
改为:Prunton products excel in...
(3)亲切、口语化的语言更加受欢迎。使用被动结构,会显得疏远冷漠。
例如:This information will be sincerely appreciated.
改为:We sincerely appreciate your information.
(4)电子邮件应写得简单明了,便于阅读,太长的内容可以用附件的方式发出。一个段落大多由一到三个句子组成。
(5)在两方,得知朋友订婚、结婚、生孩子、升职都要写信祝贺。祝贺信如同一般的简短书信,可长可短,格式上无特别的要求,但书写时应做到真诚、自然、亲切动人。内容上可尽情发挥。
[高频词汇]
look forward to…渴望做某事
in person亲自,本人
Hope to see you soon!希望早日见到你!