【正确答案】[参考范文]
[1] As is vividly depicted in the picture，a woman is sitting in front of the computer and shipping in the Internet．Around her are bags of commodity，1．[2] which suggests that she has formed a preference for online shopping．
2．[3] There is no doubt that the purpose of the picture is to reveal a common phenomenon in China，even around the world：the flourish of online shopping．[4] On the one hand，it makes a contribution to the development of the society．[5] In the first place，it creates a 10t of new-fashioned jobs，including online-store bosses and online-models and so on．[6] Secondly，online commodity is much cheaper．3．[7] Consequently，it attracts so many people who pursue for goods with super quality and competitive price．[8] On the other hand，every bean has its black You can not see the real goods and have to pay in advance．[9] According to a recent report，some lawbreakers consider it as a way to get unlawful interests．It is necessary for us to raise our vigilance in order not to be cheated．
We can not restrain the emergence of new-born things．Therefore，[10] it is high time to hold an appropriate attitude towards online shopping and adopt measures to combat illegal behaviors．

【答案解析】[主题联想]

此作文为图画式论证型作文，题材属于社会生活类。画面中，一个女孩正上网浏览商品，她身边还有商品袋，结合图画下的文字“网购”推断，这些商品就是她网购的收获，可见文章想要传达的正是当今比较流行的消费模式——网购。网购的流行促进了社会的发展，创造了一些新兴的行业，如网店店主、麻豆一族等，而且网购的商品因物美价廉吸引了很多消费者。但是网购也有一些弊端，比如：不能看到真实的商品，而且还得提前付款，很多不法分子正在利用网购这一弊端获取非法利益，所以我们必须提高警惕。
就结构而言，文章采用三段式。第一段描述图画：在这个网络如此发达的时代，人们的消费模式发生了巨大变化，并提及主题；第二段阐明图画的内涵；第三段发表自己看法。
[框架构思]
Paragraph One：Describe the picture．
Paragraph Two：Put forward an interpretation of the implications and explain the reasons．
Paragraph There：Set forth your own opinion
[范文点评]
[1] 图画式文章常用开篇语
[2] which引导非限制性定语从句
[3] 运用否定句承上启下，阐述图画含义
[4] 首先阐述网上购物的优点
[5] 和[6]用于列举
[7] 表述结果，简洁明了
[8] 用一句谚语自然过渡到缺点
[9] 通过事实论据增强说服力
[10] 表示呼吁，表达亲切