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The pictrue above clearly displayed the upward tendency in domestic box-office income, while the two dialogues indicated the teenagers preference to perchase the tickets and the unwillingness of the middle-aged to go to the cinema.

The steady increase of China’s box-office income can’t do without the new generation’s towards the movie’s industry. Young generations are generally willing to pay more for the better effects offered by the cinemas, as 3DMAX films definitely give us better experience than those which are downloaded strictly by the internet. TV film platforms, on the other hand, can’t even guarantee the authorization. It is understandable that parents tend to enjoy movies at home, for they give rather high expectation towards movies, and dissatisfaction, once formed, can be quite upsetting.

From my perspective, in order to promote the developemnt of the local film industry, not only is it our duty to make sure all movie workers acquire their deserved awards, but also we should try our uttermost to provide a healthy environment for innovation. In this case, the box-office income is likely to go up in the long run.