【正确答案】[范文] Let the Kids Be Independent In the picture the parents in tears are bidding farewell to their son at the airport. The son, sitting in the plane, cries out to his parents, 'Morn and dad, you forgot to find a nursemaid for me.' Judging from the parents' openmouthed and wide-eyed expression, we can tell that, on hearing the words, they are shocked and embarrassed. It seems that the parents are sending their son to further his study far away from home. However, the son is not ready at all for an independent life. By showing this scene, the artist wants to warn us that pampered children who grow into dependent young adults won't stand on their own feet. For example, some parents rent an apartment near the campus to cook and clean for their children in college, which turns out to be harmful to their children. Once leaving their parents, they can hardly make a living of their own. Therefore, it's of great importance for children to become independent. On the one hand, parents should give their kids chances to do their own things. On the other hand, the young adults should learn to refuse their parents to baby-sit them.
【答案解析】这是一篇图画作文,要求考生描述图画的内容,解释其深层含义,然后发表个人看法。围绕图画内容,可以将文章内容安排如下: 第1段描述图画中的内容。 第2段解释图画所表达的隐藏涵义。 第3段对于图画中的这种现象,给出个人看法。 [参考译文] 让孩子们独立 图画中一对父母在机场挥泪告别他们的儿子。而正坐在飞机里的儿子,向其父母大声哭着喊道:“爸爸妈妈,你们忘记给我请保姆了。”根据父母张大的嘴巴和傻眼的表情判断,我们可以得知,他们听到这些话时是非常的吃惊和尴尬的。 图画中看起来好像是父母在送别即将远行读书深造的儿子。然而,他们的儿子压根就没准备好过独立的生活。通过展示这一场景,绘图人想警告我们:从小被溺爱,长大成人后也不独立的人是无法自食其力的。例如,有一些父母在校园附近租房就为了给孩子做饭和打扫房间,结果却害了自己的孩子。这些孩子一旦离开父母,就几乎无法自己独立生活。 所以,要让孩子变得独立起来是很重要的。一方面,父母应该给予孩子机会,让他们做自己分内的事。另一方面,年轻的成年人也应该学会拒绝父母的“保姆看护”。