【正确答案】Dear James, I want to tell you a big news about me. I will be transferred to your city! I have been working in my company for three years and would like to change my working environment for better personal development. The good thing is that there will be a branch company built in the city you live in. I seized the chance and luckily I got promoted as a manager to work in your city. I will be officially transferred to your city one month later. I need to get a decent-furnished house with two bedrooms, one living room, one bathroom and one kitchen. If it is convenient for you, please help me get such a house. Thank you very much. Please let me know if you can. Yours Sincerely, Wang Lin

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