【正确答案】[范文] Will Traditional Bookstores Be replaced by Online Bookstores? ① The rapid development of the Internet and e-commerce has facilitated the opening of online bookstores. ② Therefore, there is a debate over whether such virtual bookstores will take the place of traditional ones. Admittedly, purchasing books online is much more convenient and efficient. ③ However, the rise of online bookstores does not necessarily cause the doom of traditional ones, since they have some irreplaceable merits. ④ On the one hand, there are always people who are just attracted to the pleasure of standing in front of stacks of books and flipping through books they like. ⑤ On the other hand, the amenities provided by traditional bookstores can never be replaced by virtual ones. An afternoon spent peacefully with the pleasant smell of books and coffee in a street comer bookstore is an experience a booklover will forever cherish. Going to a bookstore, for some, has therefore nothing to do with efficiency and convenience; it is in itself a pleasure. ⑥ In conclusion, however developed the online bookstore is, traditional bookstores have good reasons to exist. They are complementary to each other, each catering to the needs of different people. ⑦ Store owners, however, have to adjust themselves and provide better services to survive the onslaught from online bookstores.
【答案解析】第一段介绍背景,引出人们争议的话题。 第二段提出个人观点,指出传统书店的两大优势:为读者带来置身于书海的乐趣;与书香为伴,享受闲暇时光的欢乐。 第三段总结观点,并为传统书店的老板提出建议。 ①介绍网上书店形成的原因。 ②引出话题:传统书店是否会被网络书店所取代? ③转折的手法与前一句形成对比,表明个人立场,并引出下文:传统书店有不可取代的优点。 ④⑤清晰地展示了传统书店不会被网络书店取代的两个原因,结构分明。 ⑥总结观点,再次表明立场。 ⑦建议传统书店的老板在网络书店的冲击下做出调整,合理应对。