【答案解析】[参考范文]
[1] As the picture vividly depicts,a son mocks his
father as a rustic who even couldn't understand the catchwords on the
Internet,such as“bkq”,“buy some sauce”and so on.
1.[2] The idea
conveyed in the picture is apparent.The boy in the picture cold-shoulders his
father because he has no comprehension of the catchwords emerging in the website
nowadays.2.With the arrival of the Internet era,more and more new words and
phrases which have lost their original meanings emerge in large number.[3]
Moreover,these catchwords have become part of life,[4] as a result,problems
arise in communication between children and parents.[5] In general,[6] on the
one hand,this is the manifestation of social progress;[7] on the other
hand,new-fashioned generation gap turns up.
[8] There are a lot
of vivid examples in daily life.3.Children get together.[9] saying the words
only understood by themselves,which makes their parents never know what their
children are thinking about.The arising of computer jargon can not be
restrained.[10] Therefore,[11] it is high time that parents commenced
understanding and comprehending the jargons;[12] it is high time that children
began to put themselves in parents' place and communicated with parents
positively.
[主题联想]
网络流行语及随之产生的代沟
本次考试的作文为图画式观点论证型作文,题材属于社会生活类。画面中父亲在上网,网上充斥着网络流行语,如“打酱油”、“杯具”、“汗”等。这些词语已经失去了它们本来的含义,新新人类赋予了其新的含义,但大人们却是一头雾水。一旁的孩子笑话老爸不懂流行语,网络时代造成的代沟便产生了。我们究竟如何解决这个问题,值得思考。可见网络流行语的流行及随之产生的代沟是文章的主题。
文章采用三段式:第一段描述图画,对网络流行语逐渐盛行的现象进行描述,并点出文章主题;第二段阐明图画的内涵;第三段发表自己的看法并作总结。
[框架构思]
Paragraph One:Describe the picture.
Paragraph Two:Put forward the interpretation of the implication
and explain the reasons.
Paragraph Three:Make a conclusion.
[范文点评]
[1] 图画式作文经常用的开篇语
[2]
论述图片所蕴含的含义
[3] Moreover,表示进一步说明
[4] as a
result“结果是”,使上下文衔接自然
[5] In general是表示概括的用语
[6] 和[7]是常用的表达观点的短语
[8] 引出例证
[9]
saying分词短语过渡自然
[10] Therefore“因此”引出个人观点
[11]
和[12]连续用两个虚拟语气发出号召,表达贴切