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[参考范文]
'Your teenage years are the best years of your life!" Adults often say
this, but we teenagers don't understand. Our lives are hard, we think. We spend
our time studying, have to listen to our parents, and can't drive, make money or
do what we want. Many of us can't wait to get older.
But what is
the adult's point of view? Teenagers don't have to worry about making money
because their parents look after them, and they don't have to make difficult
decisions. They only need to study.
It confuses us that our
parents wish they were teenagers, but perhaps it should disturb
us. We wish
we were older; they wish they were younger. Is anyone ever happy?
Our mistake (and theirs) is wishing we were any age but what we are. It is
a mistake to wait for the future rather than improving our lives now. We should
make the best of all our years, Even if certain years are the best of our lives,
it will be too late to enjoy them by the time we realize that.