【正确答案】Dear Tom,
I am writing to invite you to my hometown, Beijing.Beijing, the capital of China, has many places of interest and delicious food.
If you stay in Beijing for five days, you could fully appreciate both the ancient culture and modern charm of this city.The first day, we should go to the Great wall.Destination of the second day should be the Forbidden City.On the third day, I will take you to the Summer Palace.The above is the historical sites.During the last two days, I will show you several famous universities.Besides, Beijing snacks and Roast Duck are what you must have.
I promise it would be a meaningful and unforgettable trip.I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,Li Ke
【范文点评】
文章结构合理，紧扣题目要求，行文流畅，句型简洁且富于变化。文章首先开门见山，向对方引出自己的家乡；然后重点介绍家乡北京有哪些旅游地点，并对游玩行程进行了说明；最后对本次旅游表达了期待。
【闪光词汇】
place of interest名胜古迹
appreciate欣赏
ancient古代的，远古的
charm魅力
look forward to期望，盼望