The misfortunes of human beings may be divided into two
classes: Firstly, those inflicted by the non-human environment 【A1】________
and, second, those inflicted by other people. As mankinds have
progressed in knowledge and technique, the second class has
become continually increasing percentage of the total. In old 【A2】________
times, famine, for example, was due to natural causes, although 【A3】________
people did their best to combat it, large numbers of them died of
starvation. At the present moment large parts of the world are
faced the threat of famine, but although natural causes have 【A4】________
contributed to the situation, the principal causes are human. For
six years the civilized nations of the world devoted all their best
energies to kill each other, and they find it difficult suddenly to 【A5】________
switch over to keeping each other live. Having destroyed 【A6】________
harvests, dismantled agricultural machinery, and disorganized
shipping. they find it no easy mater to relieve the shortage of
crops in one place by mean of a super abundance in another, as 【A7】________
would easily be done if the economic system was in normal 【A8】________
working order As this illustration shows, it is now man that is
man's worst enemy. Nature, it is true, still sees to that we are 【A9】________
mortal, but with the progress in medicine it will become more
and more common for people to live until they have had their fill
of life . We are supposed to wish to live for ever and to look
forward to the unending joys of heaven, of which, by miracle, the
monotony will never grow stale. But in fact if you question any
candid person who is no longer young, he is very likely to tell
you that, having tasted life in this world, he has no wish to begin
again as a“new boy” in another. For the future, therefore, it may
be taken that much the most important evils that mankind have to
consider are those which they inflict each other through stupidity 【A10】________
or malevolence or both.
【A1】
Firstly→First
根据句意,人类的不幸可以分为两类:一是非人类环境造成的不幸,二是人类造成的不幸。此处是以序数词列举内容,而非“首先,其次”之意。所以把firstly改成first。
【A2】
become∧continually→a
此处percentage为可数名词,前面需要用冠词修饰。所以在continually前加a。
【A3】
cause,∧although→and
根据原文,此处表示并列关系。所以although前加and。
【A4】
faced∧the→with
根据句意,目前,世界上大部分地区都面临着饥荒的威胁。be faced with为固定短语,意为“面临着”。所以在faced后加with。
【A5】
kill→killing
devote to后加doing形式,意为“致力于……”。所以把kill改成killing。
【A6】
live→alive
根据句意,世界上的文明国家都在竭尽全力互相残杀,他们突然发现很难做到转而维持彼此的生命。live通常只作前置定语,用于动物或植物,不能作表语和后置定语。所以把live改成alive。
【A7】
mean→means
by means of属于固定搭配,意为“以……的方式”。所以把mean改成means。
【A8】
was→were
此处是as if引导的与虚拟语气。虚拟现在时表示与现在事实相反的假设,其if从句的谓语形式用动词的过去式,而be动词一般使用were,主句用would/ should/ could/ might +动词原形。所以把was改成were。
【A9】
to∧that→it
根据句意,大自然始终记得我们是要死去的。see to it that为固定搭配,意为“努力使;记得;确保”。此处少了一个it。所以在to后加it。
【A10】
inflict∧each→upon
根据句意,对未来而言,人类必须考虑的最重要的罪恶是那些他们通过愚蠢或恶毒或两者兼而有之的方式而相互施加于对方的罪恶。inflict是不及物动词,所以在each other前加介词upon。