问答题
【正确答案】
[精彩范文]
As we can see in the picture, a woodpecker stops on a cement electric pole and pecks as usual. But this "tree" is so hard that the woodpecker can't hammer its beak into it. It is obvious that it takes the pole as a tree.
Faced with such a picture, many of us have become aware of the fact: everything is changing, in no way do we stick to conventions. Perhaps we always have one thing done with the same idea but we can't with it do another thing. It is due to deal with different things or people in different ways.
From what has been discussed above, we can safely draw the conclusion that experience is very significant, but one will make mistakes if he judges new things by the old standards, as the woodpecker does. We should learn to make a concrete analysis of concrete conditions and only by this can we keep pace with the progress of the society.
[精彩范文]
As we can see in the picture, a woodpecker stops on a cement electric pole and pecks as usual. But this "tree" is so hard that the woodpecker can't hammer its beak into it. It is obvious that it takes the pole as a tree.
Faced with such a picture, many of us have become aware of the fact: everything is changing, in no way do we stick to conventions. Perhaps we always have one thing done with the same idea but we can't with it do another thing. It is due to deal with different things or people in different ways.
From what has been discussed above, we can safely draw the conclusion that experience is very significant, but one will make mistakes if he judges new things by the old standards, as the woodpecker does. We should learn to make a concrete analysis of concrete conditions and only by this can we keep pace with the progress of the society.
【答案解析】[试题解析]
本题是一图表作文，图表题作文的写法一般分三步：描述图表一说明含义一例证。本篇作文从命题角度反映了如下特点：(1)主题鲜明。对于所有考生而言，啄木鸟无论是从书本上还是现实中都是人类熟悉的鸟类，人们很容易想出它是树木的守护者。但该图画所显示的是一只啄木鸟在啄一根水泥电线杆，可见它隐含着其他含义。(2)中心思想明确。乍一看还以为是啄木鸟在为一根有病的树治病，但详细观察它啄的是一根电线杆，原来它把电线杆看成树了。如果按前面想法去写可能跑题，可见该文章透露的内容应是对待事物应随机应变，对具体情况具体分析。
[语言技巧]
(1) In no way do we stick to conventions．“我们决不能墨守成规。”这是一倒装句，体现了文章主题。
(2) make a concrete analysis of concrete conditions“对具体情况作具体分析，”该句也体现了文章主题。
(3) Only by this can we keep pace with the progress of the society．“只有这样我们才能跟上社会的步伐。”用一倒装句结束全文，是文章主题的升华。
本题是一图表作文，图表题作文的写法一般分三步：描述图表一说明含义一例证。本篇作文从命题角度反映了如下特点：(1)主题鲜明。对于所有考生而言，啄木鸟无论是从书本上还是现实中都是人类熟悉的鸟类，人们很容易想出它是树木的守护者。但该图画所显示的是一只啄木鸟在啄一根水泥电线杆，可见它隐含着其他含义。(2)中心思想明确。乍一看还以为是啄木鸟在为一根有病的树治病，但详细观察它啄的是一根电线杆，原来它把电线杆看成树了。如果按前面想法去写可能跑题，可见该文章透露的内容应是对待事物应随机应变，对具体情况具体分析。
[语言技巧]
(1) In no way do we stick to conventions．“我们决不能墨守成规。”这是一倒装句，体现了文章主题。
(2) make a concrete analysis of concrete conditions“对具体情况作具体分析，”该句也体现了文章主题。
(3) Only by this can we keep pace with the progress of the society．“只有这样我们才能跟上社会的步伐。”用一倒装句结束全文，是文章主题的升华。