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表达个人观点和说明的语言应用能力 |
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文章结构及连贯性 |
用适当的段落和衔接词清晰地论述自己的观点 |
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中性文体 |
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目标读者感觉 |
使读者能理解作者的观点 |
[参考范文]
People's lives will change dramatically in the next 50 years. We
anticipate advances in genetics, medicine, and transportation, the opening of
international markets, and more. People look enthusiastically to the future,
Yet, life today is also dramatically different from life 50 years ago, and that
life was dramatically different from life 100 years ago.
Is life
"better" now than it was fifty years ago? For many people, the answer is yes.
But for many, the answer is no, Hunger, poverty, misery, repression and cruelty
existed a hundred years ago. They existed thousands of years ago, and they exist
today. "Technology" and "development" have improved life dramatically for great
numbers of people. But to some people these benefits are not available, and
their existence alone does not address the problems of those people. For ail our
"advancement", a large part of our world lives worse, or no better, than it did
fifty years ago. A future in which all people could enjoy the fruits of this
advancement would be a future truly worth celebrating.