【正确答案】
[范文]
Dear John,
I am so excited to learn that you have been admitted by Beijing University, a famous university in China. I feel so proud of you, and want to congratulate on your success.
As you may know, there has been a tremendous breakthrough in some fields at my university led by a group of outstanding professors, especially in the program of Material Dynamics. And this college will provide you with more advanced information and first-rate facilities than any other college.
I believe studying in such a famous school will make your college life as colorful and meaningful as possible. At there you will be provided with many opportunities to broaden your horizons.
Wish you a bright future.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming

【答案解析】[写作分析]
日常生活中无论是亲朋好友毕业、晋升、获奖、开业，还是订婚、结婚、生日，总之遇有可喜可贺之事，都需要写上一封信表示祝贺。祝贺信应当充满真诚和热情，收信人读后会感到喜悦和振奋。祝贺信如同一般的简短书信，可长可短，格式上无特别的要求。祝贺信既可以写得正式一些，也可以写得轻松一些，具体要视情况而定。对不太熟悉的朋友、师长、领导或工作伙伴适合写得正式一些，以表示礼貌和尊重；对熟悉的朋友则可以写得轻松随便一些。但无论采用哪种方式，祝贺信都必须表达由衷的感情，而且写信要及时。
[常用句式]
1．We wish you success in your new post and look forward to closer cooperation with you．
我们祝愿您在新的职位取得成功，期待我们的进一步合作。
Z．Congratulations on your promotion／graduation／Success／progress／achievements．
祝贺你升职／毕业／胜利／进步／成功。
3．Wish you a Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!
圣诞快乐，新年快乐!
4．We all send you hearty greetings on your happy birthday．
在你生日之际，送上我们所有人最衷心的祝福。
5．We sincerely congratulate on the happiest event of your life．
我们对你生活最幸福的事表示真诚的祝贺。