Now online shopping has become a fashion. Online shopping has many advantages, but also has many problems. How do you think of this phenomenon? What are your suggestions?
Please write an essay of about 200 words on the following topic:
Online Shopping
In the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement and in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details. In the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion.
Marks will be awarded for organization as well as for syntactic variety and appropriate word choice.
My Views on Online Shopping
Nowadays, can we find a person who has not experienced online shopping? Definitely not! Online shopping is coming into fashion in most of the cities due to the rapid development of the Internet.
Online shopping is welcomed by most people due to various reasons. From the perspective of consumer, it can save some time for people who don't have much spare time. Just click the mouse, they can get whatever they want while staying at home. For the retailers, it can cut some costs for those who don't have much circulating funds. They don't have to rent a house and spend money on employees compared with the traditional trade mode. However, there are still some defects in online shopping. First, face-to-face deal makes online shopping less reliable and trustworthy. Second, people will lose the fun of bargaining.
It is undeniable that shopping on the Internet has become an irresistible trend in modern society. It's of great urgency that we need to regulate the relative laws in accordance with the rapid growth of online shopping. Only in this way can we enjoy the pleasure and convenience of online shopping without the concern of being cheated.
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