【正确答案】 Smiling, she rotated the magazine again and said, "If there's no shot, I'll be your wife." With this she raised the small revolver again. Her hand a little shaky, she aimed at him for a long time, but suddenly put down her gun in dejection. "I won't accept what fate decides anymore, " she finally said. "I only beg you not to be a bandit anymore and to start a new life with me."
He was stunned, staring at her blankly as if making up a dream."You were born with a bad life, but I'm willing to be your wife and suffer with you, " she said, tears mysteriously welling up her eyes.Perplexed, he walked over, picked up his gun for a look, and was dumbfounded."I rotated it two times, but each time the bullet landed at the breech, " she cried. "At that moment, I really wanted to kill you, but when I thought of your miserable life, I felt a little sorry for you. You don't know, but I also have had a bad life."
【答案解析】背景介绍
本篇节选自著名小小说高手孙方友先生的《女票》,文字简洁、跌宕起伏。《女票》属于传奇小说,翻译时须兼顾风格,文中出现不少地道的口语,翻译时,须注意句子的分合。
难点解析
- 弹槽滚儿……枪管……:此处出现了对应的英语单词本身比较常见,但使用了其较为生僻的意思。分别译为“magazine”、 “breech”。
- 俺不认命……你命不好……可一想你命这般苦……俺也是个苦命的人啊……:短短一段文字,出现了四次“命”,带有浓厚的中国文化特色。因为英语中没有相应的词语和相同的文化概念,故只能采用释译的方法,单独处理。“俺不认命”译为“I wont accept what fate decides anymore.”,“你命不好”译为“You were born with a bad life.”, “可一想你命这般苦”译为“when I thought of your miserable life”,“俺也是个苦命的人啊”译为“I also have had a bad life.”。
- 呆呆地:这里表示“出神地”、 “茫然地”、 “毫无表情地”,故译为“blankly”。
- 她不知为什么眼里就闪出了泪花儿:地道的英语表达习惯多用物作主语,原文中的“为什么”可以理解为“神秘地”、 “不知道原因地”,故整句可译为“tears mysteriously welling up her eyes”。