假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你打算邀请英国好友Jim为你们班做一次关于英语写作的线上经验交流。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:

1.建议交流的具体内容及其原因;

2.交流时间和其他相关事项。

注意:1.词数100左右;

2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

Dear Jim,

___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________


Yours,

Li Hua

【正确答案】

Dear Jim,

How’s everything?

I’m writing to invite you to give us an online talk on English writing. Our classmates seem to be weak in organisation. Would you please give us some suggestions on how to connect sentences logically, how to develop a paragraph, and how to structure an essay?

The talk will last about an hour, and you can decide on a date at your convenience. Please let me know which platform you’ll use. It would be great if we could have a 10-minute question and answer session at the end of your talk.

Looking forward to your reply.


Yours,

Li Hua

【答案解析】

1.词汇积累

最近好吗:How’s everything → How’s it going

提供、给予:give → offer / provide

不擅长:be weak in → be bad at / be poor in

建议:suggestion → advice

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句:I’m writing to invite you to give us an online talk on English writing.

拓展句:I’m writing to ask if it is convenient for you to offer us an online talk on English writing.

【点睛】【高分句型1】Would you please give us some suggestions on how to connect sentences logically, how to develop a paragraph, and how to structure an essay?(运用了疑问词+不定式作宾语)

【高分句型2】It would be great if we could have a 10-minute question and answer session at the end of your talk.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)