写作题

Directions: Write an essay of about 400 words on the following topic:

Some people believe that success in life comes from taking risks or chances. Others believe that success results from careful planning. In your opinion, what does success come from? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

In the first part of your essay you should state clearly your main argument, and in the second part you should support your argument with appropriate details. In the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your essay.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks. 

【正确答案】

Success and Chances

Success is a hot topic in human history. Different people hold different views on it. Some opinions success is the outcome of careful planning and persistent hard-work. However, I hold the opinion that truly meaningful success is come from taking risks or chances. If one can grasp the critical chance at critical time, one will have more possibilities to be successful.

To begin with, taking risks and holding chances could make being successful much easier because we become successful on our own initiative. For example, Bill Gates, the founder of Microsoft Corporation, was admitted into Harvard University when computer was developing ferociously. When he heard about the news that the first personal computer came out, he found it is a big chance immediately and he dropped out from the university to set up a company with his friends. Later, his business flourished and he occupied the seat of the world’s richest man for many years. It is because he grasped the chance that he became so successful. Likewise, in Silicon Valley, there will be some new companies are set up every day because the initiators think their ideas will work. In the competitive society, sometimes there is not enough time for us to ensure careful and consummate plan. So being brave to take risks or chances is essential for our success. Chances are easy to lose if we miss them. We have to grasp every chance at hand. If you are failed, you can learn a lesson and become mature. You can sum up your experience constantly and improve the efficiency of your work.

To sum up, if you have a high level’s vision of success, surely taking risks or chances is more helpful than careful planning. In other words, you need to do the things as the chance appears than to think again and again till you get enough confidence. Taking risks or chances could make your success become easier, save your time and give you the right way to the success you like. 

【答案解析】

本文讲的是成功是来源于冒险还是来源于仔细筹划。作者先引出了该话题,陈述了关于成功的话题,通常有两种看法:一是善于冒险,抓住机会,二是,认真规划。作者更支持第一种观点,然后作者给出了自己的理由。抓住机会就是抓住了主动性,更容易成功一些,作者给出了比尔盖茨的例子,还有就是机会是稍纵即逝的,就算是失败了我们也能吸取很多经验教训,提升自己。最后作者又陈述了自己的观点:抓住机遇更加重要。