【正确答案】Sample C
Dear Miss Foster
I express an interest in your company's services. I describe my company's training needs, we are an established company providing a wide range of training services for all kinds of bussniss, we have our own purpose-built centre where we hold courses, or training can be offered at the client's own premises if preferred, we offer excellent value for money and a full 100% satisfaction guarantee. So please inviting you to a meeting next week.
Band 1
The first and fourth points are addressed, but the candidate's response is mostly lifted from the input and is largely irrelevant.
Sample D
Dear Miss Foster,
I write this letter for interesting in your company services, getting this informating from internet, we know you can offer venual for trainging.
On 13 June we want to held a training new staff about our products, it will have 30 persons attend to the course.
Due to your purpose-built centre is near to our company and have suitable place, we can work with together.
I invite you come to my company next week. I look forward hearing from you.
Linda
Band 3
The third point is not achieved. A number of errors are present, but overall this is a reasonable achievement of the task set.